August 27, 20179 yr 6 minutes ago, Pamyu said: oh it's lovely @CiaoCiao and so true of Yuzu's Requiem performance thank you
August 27, 20179 yr Here is my first Haiku attempt, trying to reflect a little bit of the magical and emotional experience I had watching Hope and Legacy at Worlds. "Magic sparks from steel; Deep cuts here, there, gliding through time, piercing the heart."
August 27, 20179 yr On 8/27/2017 at 10:00 PM, Hydroblade said: Who wants to be brave and write a haiku in japanese I would if I could........I don't think Google translate counts though??
August 28, 20179 yr 3 hours ago, Hydroblade said: Who wants to be brave and write a haiku in japanese I tried only because I felt particularily sad and started writing by myself... but I bet I totally got the concept of haiku wrong LOL. Here goes, crippling Japanese forward: 羽生の平和 見る時自分 を見つける。
August 28, 20179 yr 8 minutes ago, Murieleirum said: I tried only because I felt particularily sad and started writing by myself... but I bet I totally got the concept of haiku wrong LOL. Here goes, crippling Japanese forward: 羽生の平和 見る時自分 を見つける。 Awww. I think i got it it's really nice <3 My try at crippling japanese too (i should be making swans not haiku but eeh... Olympic related!) 如月や (kisaragi ya) 理想の先へ (risou no saki he) 氷上で (hyoujou de) I'm going to try and translate it... believe it or not sometimes i have a hard time translating things i wrote myself... So it might not be perfect and i might be really wrong hahahaha On the second month To go beyond your ideal On the surface of the ice
August 28, 20179 yr 1 hour ago, Murieleirum said: I tried only because I felt particularily sad and started writing by myself... but I bet I totally got the concept of haiku wrong LOL. Here goes, crippling Japanese forward: 羽生の平和 見る時自分 を見つける。 What does your haiku mean?
August 28, 20179 yr 2 hours ago, ruruzest said: @Murieleirum @Hydroblade I admire your commitment to learn Japanese I'm a person with lots of free time
August 28, 20179 yr 7 hours ago, ruruzest said: What does your haiku mean? Should have posted the translation like Hydro but I was waiting if maybe someone found some mistakes in it The translation is something like: 羽生の平和 (Hanyu no heiwa) Hanyu's harmony 見る時自分 (Miru-toki Jibun) When I see it, I を見つける。(wo mitsukeru) Discover myself.
August 28, 20179 yr I did a Chopin marathon again... Taking deep breaths, Eyes closed and calm expression. He's off to rule the ice.
September 2, 20179 yr Author Yuzuru brightens up my life He sets my world alight I can't wait for bed To lay down my head And dream about him all night!!
September 2, 20179 yr Maybe a bit too much of waxing lyrical, But thought to try something that fits into a melancholic mood this time so... Uncertainty and dread they may creep in Days of gray and endless slumbering But one thing I know The sadness will thaw Because there is you, full of spirit, full of daring
September 2, 20179 yr I want to try haiku too! But I'm a noob sorry :(( The drum beats Carefully chanting The mantra
September 9, 20178 yr i wrote a little something :-) he moves, like a dream —memories that resurface from murky depths, scenes cut out from rolls of film, flickering. he moves, like a song —glittering stars that descend from the heavens, the sound of water hitting the rocks, never-ending. he moves, like a wish —prayers from you to me, from me to you, from us to God, deep and shallow breaths in the interstice of smiles, promising. he moves, like a warrior —ink that never runs out til its story has been told, cries that can be heard from deep inside, reverberating. he moves, and he moves —and he stops, chilling. he moves.
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