singcarcom Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 This is my first limerick attempt; Yuzu, you're that special. XD With a "shuu" Off in the air goes Yuzu Then a "paa" And the crowd goes "ah" For having seen this beautiful view Link to comment
PPOS Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 11 minutes ago, singcarcom said: This is my first limerick attempt; Yuzu, you're that special. XD With a "shuu" Off in the air goes Yuzu Then a "paa" And the crowd goes "ah" For having seen this beautiful view Great minds think alike. .I wrote this one. There was a boy called Yuzu And boy what a to do He would create When he would skate Around with a paaaaah and a Shu! Link to comment
katonice Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 Carnival on Ice He's our sensei, our wonderful teacher Who said he wanted to skate with us together He said, "Let me show you..." Then he went, "Ton ton ton suuuuu~" And said "Jozu" with sparkles and laughter (I'm finding these limericks are a great way to wax lyrical about Yuzu lol.) Link to comment
PPOS Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 There are some little rules though regarding syllables which i wasn't clear about. ... A limerick is a humorous poem consisting of five lines. The first, second, and fifth lines must have seven to ten syllables while rhyming and having the same verbal rhythm. The third and fourth lines only have to have five to seven syllables, and have to rhyme with each other and have the same rhythm. But I think poetic licence is ok when it comes to our beautiful Yuzuru. ..we should just keep writing Haiku's , limericks and any kind of poetry/accoladesabiut him we like...xx Link to comment
Hydroblade Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 Your costume needs sparkles and ruffles And you can't have that without muscles So you can jump those quads In outrageous purple pants Just PLEASE don't make your jumps doubles Link to comment
PPOS Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 3 hours ago, Hydroblade said: Your costume needs sparkles and ruffles And you can't have that without muscles So you can jump those quads In outrageous purple pants Just PLEASE don't make your jumps doubles Def poetic licence there @Hydroblade Link to comment
Hydroblade Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 1 minute ago, PPOS said: Deaf poetic licence there @Hydroblade Had to keep it family friendly Also you can totally make double rhyme with ruffle if you speak with a potato in your mouth Link to comment
singcarcom Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 Yuzuru is Hope; Yuzuru is Legacy As we step onto a rink so icy, We struggle to reach brilliancy. When falls are hard to cope, You'll give us hope And we'll always recall your legacy. Link to comment
singcarcom Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 @Hydroblade Can we collect these limericks and give Yuzu a book of limericks from Planet Hanyu for ACI? Link to comment
Hydroblade Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 Just now, singcarcom said: @Hydroblade Can we collect these limericks and give Yuzu a book of limericks from Planet Hanyu for ACI? Well the original project is to collect messages for him and give them to him at ACI... I suppose you could write a limerick and send that as your message Link to comment
robin Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 3 hours ago, PPOS said: How did you cheat @robin My last sentence was not a sentence hihi I wanna give it another shot with the right rules... took me considerably longer. Yuzu, he knows one or two things About killing us, his underlings Providing us with salt Cuteness that knows no halt His smile got more power than kings Link to comment
PPOS Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 3 minutes ago, robin said: My last sentence was not a sentence hihi I wanna give it another shot with the right rules... took me considerably longer. Yuzu, he knows one or two things About killing us, his underlings Providing us with salt Cuteness that knows no halt His smile got more power than kings Brilliant, cept I'd change the last line to His smile's got more power than kings Link to comment
robin Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 1 minute ago, PPOS said: Brilliant, cept I'd change the last line to His smile's got more power than kings Oh yeah, that's why the last line was bothering me! Link to comment
katonice Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 There's a lot of great things about being your Pooh The most wonderful of which is to be loved so true Although we might disagree About how you squish me It's still heaven to be smothered by you. - Pooh ETA: Oh and happy 1100th page to us! Link to comment
Hydroblade Posted August 22, 2017 Share Posted August 22, 2017 29 minutes ago, katonice said: There's a lot of great things about being your Pooh The most wonderful of which is to be loved so true Although we might disagree About how you squish me It's still heaven to be smothered by you. - Pooh ETA: Oh and happy 1100th page to us! YES. I want more fluffy Pooh limericks <3 the only love greater than the love of Pooh and Yuzu is probably Yuzu and the ice. Link to comment
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