This is my first limerick attempt; Yuzu, you're that special. XD

 

With a "shuu"

Off in the air goes Yuzu

Then a "paa"

And the crowd goes "ah"

For having seen this beautiful view

 

11 minutes ago, singcarcom said:

This is my first limerick attempt; Yuzu, you're that special. XD

 

With a "shuu"

Off in the air goes Yuzu

Then a "paa"

And the crowd goes "ah"

For having seen this beautiful view

 

Great minds think alike. .I wrote this one.

 

There was a boy called Yuzu 
And boy what a to do
He would create
When he would skate
Around with a paaaaah and a Shu!

Carnival on Ice

 

He's our sensei, our wonderful teacher

Who said he wanted to skate with us together

He said, "Let me show you..."

Then he went, "Ton ton ton suuuuu~"

And said "Jozu" with sparkles and laughter 

 

(I'm finding these limericks are a great way to wax lyrical about Yuzu lol.)

There are some little rules though regarding syllables which i wasn't clear about. ...

A limerick is a humorous poem consisting of five lines. The first, second, and fifth lines must have seven to ten syllables while rhyming and having the same verbal rhythm. The third and fourth lines only have to have five to seven syllables, and have to rhyme with each other and have the same rhythm.

 

But I think poetic licence is ok when it comes to our beautiful Yuzuru. ..we should just keep writing Haiku's , limericks and any kind of poetry/accoladesabiut him we like...xx

Your costume needs sparkles and ruffles

And you can't have that without muscles

So you can jump those quads

In outrageous purple pants

Just PLEASE don't make your jumps doubles

 

3 hours ago, Hydroblade said:

Your costume needs sparkles and ruffles

And you can't have that without muscles

So you can jump those quads

In outrageous purple pants

Just PLEASE don't make your jumps doubles

 

Def poetic licence there @Hydroblade

1 minute ago, PPOS said:

Deaf poetic licence there @Hydroblade

Had to keep it family friendly 

Also you can totally make double rhyme with ruffle if you speak with a potato in your mouth

Yuzuru is Hope; Yuzuru is Legacy

 

As we step onto a rink so icy,

We struggle to reach brilliancy.

When falls are hard to cope,

You'll give us hope

And we'll always recall your legacy.

@Hydroblade   Can we collect these limericks and give Yuzu a book of limericks from Planet Hanyu for ACI? 

Just now, singcarcom said:

@Hydroblade   Can we collect these limericks and give Yuzu a book of limericks from Planet Hanyu for ACI? 

Well the original project is to collect messages for him and give them to him at ACI... I suppose you could write a limerick and send that as your message  

3 hours ago, PPOS said:

How did you cheat @robin

 

My last sentence was not a sentence hihi

 

I wanna give it another shot with the right rules... took me considerably longer. 

 

Yuzu, he knows one or two things

About killing us, his underlings

Providing us with salt 

Cuteness that knows no halt

His smile got more power than kings

3 minutes ago, robin said:

 

My last sentence was not a sentence hihi

 

I wanna give it another shot with the right rules... took me considerably longer. 

 

Yuzu, he knows one or two things

About killing us, his underlings

Providing us with salt 

Cuteness that knows no halt

His smile got more power than kings

Brilliant, cept I'd change the last line to 

His smile's got more power than kings

1 minute ago, PPOS said:

Brilliant, cept I'd change the last line to 

His smile's got more power than kings

 

Oh yeah, that's why the last line was bothering me!

There's a lot of great things about being your Pooh

The most wonderful of which is to be loved so true

Although we might disagree

About how you squish me

It's still heaven to be smothered by you. 

 

- Pooh

 

ETA: Oh and happy 1100th page to us! 

29 minutes ago, katonice said:

There's a lot of great things about being your Pooh

The most wonderful of which is to be loved so true

Although we might disagree

About how you squish me

It's still heaven to be smothered by you. 

 

- Pooh

 

ETA: Oh and happy 1100th page to us! 

YES. I want more fluffy Pooh limericks <3 the only love greater than the love of Pooh and Yuzu is probably Yuzu and the ice.