It might have come off a little too harsh. I can see his skating skills are good, good control, lightness on the ice. His dance training somewhat shines through in the way he holds his carriage, and the quality and control of certain moves shows great awareness.
The choreography itself has only a ghost of a concept, and is pretty messy at places. He drops his performance building into jumps, and the way he tries to cram in moves comes off a little sloppy for sure. His arms are long, but they don't very often extend the notes of the music to create moments. The maturity will come with time. Just my observation that he still needs to be trained to perform more like a senior man.